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영어 첨삭 좀 부탁드립니다~

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Eyelash SERUM 
EYELASH & BROW
ENHANCING SERUM

IRRITATION-FREE FORMULA

LONGER, THICKER & HEALTHIER LASHES

3ML / 0.1FL OZ

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Our formula is non-irritating, gentle and safe for all skin types. The Serum was specially created to strengthen, magnify, prime and lengthen your natural lashes and brows.
It has been proven to help boost thickness and length of eyelashes with only 2 weeks of daily use.

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Ingredients: Purified water, Alanine, Isoleucine, Arginine, Glutamicacid, Serine Valine, Lysine, Threonine, Aspartic acid, Histidine, Butanediol, Polygonum multiflorum extract, Nymphaea coerulea flower extract, Panax ginseng root extract, Hydrolyzed silk, Castor Oil, Oligopeptide-1, Vitamin E

Directions : Apply on clean face before applying makeup. Eyelids and lashes should be completely clean and dry. Dip the brush once per eye and wipe off any excess product from the brush before applying. Apply along the upper lash line or over the brow area. Blot away the extra serum to prevent leaking into eyes, Recommended use is twice per day.

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Caution: Keep out of reach of Children. Do not swallow or apply directly to the eyeball.




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Eyelash SERUM

EYELASH & BROW

ENHANCING SERUM

IRRITATION-FREE FORMULA

LONGER, THICKER & HEALTHIER LASHES

3ML / 0.1FL OZ

-----------------------------------------------------

Our formula is non-irritating, gentle and safe for all skin types. This special Serum is created to strengthen, magnify, prime and lengthen your natural lashes and brows. It is proven to help boost the thickness and length of the eyelashes and eyebrows with just two weeks of daily use.

------------------------------------------------------

Ingredients: Purified water, Alanine, Isoleucine, Arginine, Glutamicacid, Serine Valine, Lysine, Threonine, Aspartic acid, Histidine, Butanediol, Polygonum multiflorum extract, Nymphaea coerulea flower extract, Panax ginseng root extract, Hydrolyzed silk, Castor Oil, Oligopeptide-1, and Vitamin E

Directions : Apply before makeup. Thoroughly clean and dry your eyelids/eyebrows before use. For each eyelash/eyebrow, dip the brush once and wipe off excess Serum before applying. After applying, blot away any extra Serum to prevent the Serum from getting into the eyes. Apply along the upper lashes/over the brows.

Usage: Twice a day recommended.

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Caution: Keep out of reach of children. Do not eat or apply directly into the eyes.

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