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Today, I will introduce Vincent Van Gogh's "Starry Nights."
Vincent Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter.
Half of this picture is painted with the night sky and stars.
Van Gogh felt the night sky free.
It's such a beautiful view that I want to live in this painting.
There is also a tall, giant cypress tree in this painting.
The cypress tree is the link between life and death.
There are all, and I feel Vincent Van Gogh free and optimistic.
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Today, I will introduce Vincent Van Gogh's "Starry Nights."
Vincent Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter.
Half of this picture is painted with the night sky and stars.
Van Gogh felt the night sky free.
It's such a beautiful view that I want to live in this painting.
There is also a tall, giant cypress tree in this painting.
The cypress tree is the link between life and death.
There are all, and I feel Vincent Van Gogh free and optimistic.
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