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영어지문 첨삭부탁드립니다.
문법틀린거나 자연스럽게 바꿀부분 알려주세요
I would recommend Gyeongbokgung Palace at the heart of Seoul.Because I had fun when I visited with my friend last year. It is one of the most beautiful landmarks. Gyeongbokgung Palace means the "Palace Greatly Blessed by Heaven. If you go there, you can see majestic traditional places and the architectural style of the Joseon Dynasty. Also, You can try on Hanbok which is Korean traditional costumes and go sightseeing while wearing Hanbok. You can really enjoy it.
문법틀린거나 자연스럽게 바꿀부분 알려주세요
I would recommend Gyeongbokgung Palace at the heart of Seoul.Because I had fun when I visited with my friend last year. It is one of the most beautiful landmarks. Gyeongbokgung Palace means the "Palace Greatly Blessed by Heaven. If you go there, you can see majestic traditional places and the architectural style of the Joseon Dynasty. Also, You can try on Hanbok which is Korean traditional costumes and go sightseeing while wearing Hanbok. You can really enjoy it.