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I would recommend Gyeongbokgung Palace at the heart of Seoul.Because I had fun when I visited with my friend last year. It is one of the most beautiful landmarks. Gyeongbokgung Palace means the "Palace Greatly Blessed by Heaven. If you go there, you can see majestic traditional places and the architectural style of the Joseon Dynasty. Also, You can try on Hanbok which is Korean traditional costumes and go sightseeing while wearing Hanbok. You can really enjoy it.



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I would recommend Gyeongbokgung Palace, which is located in the heart of Seoul. I had a great time when I visited there with my friend last year. It is one of the most beautiful landmarks. Gyeongbokgung Palace means “Palace Greatly Blessed by Heaven”. If you visit, you can see majestic traditional places and the architectural style of the Joseon Dynasty. Also, you can try on Hanbok, which are Korean traditional costumes, and go sightseeing while wearing Hanbok. It’s a truly enjoyable experience.

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