긴 영어 편지 문법 확인 부탁드립니다!

I get happy to your pen pal!

- I'm so happy to be your pen pal!

나는 너의 펜팔(편지쓰는 친구)가 되어서 기쁘다

I get happy는 틀린건 아니지만 수동표현이 더 자연스러워요

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I read many Russia's storys by comic book becomes i have much interest in Rossia, and i have an idea to visit Russia in the future!

-I read many Russian comic books because I take interest in Russia, and I have future plans to visit Russia!

Russian= 러시아의

by comic books 보다는 러시아의 만화책들이라고 표현해주고 I(나)는 다 대문자에요. an idea 보다는 복수로 ideas to visit RUssia in the future 이라고 하셔도 괜찮아요

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And i am so sorry to sending pen pal get late...

- Also, sorry for the late reply..

so sorry 뒤에는 for 이 와야해요 so sorry for (이유) 이유를 말하는거니까 전치사 for 이 와야해요

그리고 get을 쓰면 한 문장에 send, get 동사가 2개가 돼요

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Actually i deleted Slowly by busy school life.

But now i got spare, i installed Slowly again.

- Actually I deleted Slowly because of my busy school life.

But now I got some free time, so I downloaded Slowly again.

by보다 ~때문이다의 because를 쓰시고 spare time(free time) 여유가 생겼다 라는 표현을 쓰는게 더 자연스러울 것 같아요 installed보단 downloaded 가 더 자연스러울 것 같아요

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I love take a picture like you!

And i am not good at, but i love cooking too!

I think our interest things are similar!

-I love to take (taking) a picture like you!

Also I'm not good at cooking but I love cooking too!

I think our interests are similar!

love 뒤는 to부정사나 동명사 모두 올 수 있고 take와 같은 동사원형은 불가능해요 이건 to부정사 동명사에 나오는 개념입니다.

at 뒤에 명사가 안와서 비어있는데 전치사 뒤엔 무조건 명사가 와야해요

interest things는 좀 어색해서 그냥 interests라고 해도 관심사가 비슷하다고 해석됩니다

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Thanks to wrote pen pal to Korean!

-Thanks for writing pen pal to me! ---Korean이 한국인이라면 나한테로 고치기

-Thanks for writing pen pal in Korean! ----한국어로 작성해서 고맙다는 표현이면 이렇게

And please understand i use translator because i cant Russian.

-And please understand I use a translator because I can't speak Russian.

번역기 (단수)이므로 앞에 부정사를 써줍니다

(언어)를 못한다라는 표현은 I can't speak (language)

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We will be very good friends!

Thank you, Victoria!

Have a good day!

-이건 잘 쓰셨어영

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제가 틀린 부분이 있을 수도 있지만 최대한 자연스럽게 고쳤습니다

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긴 영어 편지 문법 확인 부탁드립니다!

내용이 길어서 점수 1000 걸어요!

펜팔로 보낼 내용이고 빅토리아는 사람 이름이에요.

틀린 문장 하나씩 왜 틀렸는지, 어떻게 고쳐야 되는지, 관련된 문법 전부 설명해 주세요! (점수 많이 걸어서 바라는 게 많네요..ㅎㅎ)

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고쳐야 할 문장들을 다시 영어로 표현했습니다. 참고하시기 바랍니다.

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Hi, Victoria!

I get happy to your pen pal!

I'm happy to write to you.

I read many Russia's storys by comic book becomes i have much interest in Rossia, and i have an idea to visit Russia in the future!

Since I've read lots of Russian comic books, I'm much interested in Russia, and I'm planning to visit Russia in the near future.

And i am so sorry to sending pen pal get late...

I'm sorry for delayed response.

Actually i deleted Slowly by busy school life.

I've been quite hectic in school.

But now i got spare, i installed Slowly again.

Now I can find a time to spare.

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I love take a picture like you!

I love taking pictures as you do.

And i am not good at, but i love cooking too!

Although I'm not good at cooking, yet I love cooking.

I think our interest things are similar!

I think we have a lot of things in common.

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Thanks to wrote pen pal to Korean!

Thanks for writing to me as a pen pal.

And please understand i use translator because i cant Russian.

Since I can't read and write Russian, I had to ask someone to translate Korean into Russian. Please understand me.

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We will be very good friends!

I believe we'll be able to be good friends.

Thank you, Victoria!

Have a good day!