급해요ㅜ 영어수행보는데 영어문장 피드백좀 주세요ㅜㅜ
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오늘 영어수행을 보는데 제가 문장쓴거 틀린거 있거나 부자연스러운 부분있는지 피드백좀 부탁드려요ㅜ
+누구와 갈것인지 , 어떻게 갈것인지 , 가고싶은이유도 추가시켜주세요..!
I will tell you about my dream trip.
I’m going to go to Seoul in Korea.
On the first day, I will wear Hanbok and take a picture at Gkengbokgung(경복궁)
On second day, I will go to Namsan Tower(남산타워) to see the beautiful view and ride a cablecar.
On third day, I’m going to go to 동대문 and eat delicious food and go shopping.
Thank you for listening!!
+누구와 갈것인지 , 어떻게 갈것인지 , 가고싶은이유도 추가시켜주세요..!
I will tell you about my dream trip.
I’m going to go to Seoul in Korea.
On the first day, I will wear Hanbok and take a picture at Gkengbokgung(경복궁)
On second day, I will go to Namsan Tower(남산타워) to see the beautiful view and ride a cablecar.
On third day, I’m going to go to 동대문 and eat delicious food and go shopping.
Thank you for listening!!
