IELTS TASK 2 Writing 입니다.

IELTS TASK 2 Writing 입니다.

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Nowadays, most people are moving to the city central from countryside. So countryside population is fall.
We will communicate about this problem is the whether positive or negative.
The city and countryside are very different because first of all , the city environment is dirty, and the city is not nature. however the countryside has a lot of tree and clean air.
But the city has a number of modern building and there such as street and neighborhood are developed . And the animals live in countryside. so many people are dangerous because the animal is a beast . if some beast don’t good judge, many people get hurt from beast and the people can’t go hospital because the countryside hospital do close early. But the city has a lot of hospital and the hospital do while 24 hours. So many people can go to hospital on late time.
And the city has traffic is crowd so many people get difficult to drive a car. Also, the various product are very expensive . many people think a more about buying the things, but the many tourist and the famous restaurant are in the city so the people can eat many types food the result is to sum up my think is positive Because my grandfather was a farmer, so he was live in countryside my family often don’t saw grandfather but my grandfather moved to city from countryside so currently we possible meet a grandfather on every time .add, we are happy because we can easily see grandfather.

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