영작 문법 체크 좀 부탁드려요~
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게시물 수정 , 삭제는 로그인 필요
ㅠ_ㅠ 영작을 하긴 했는데;;;;;;월요일(4.13)까지 마감을 해야 하는데..
제 실력이 허접해서 누구에게 부탁을 해야할 지 몰라 즐 지식인에~올려봅니다~
시간이 얼마 없어서... (__) 부족하지만 부탁드릴께요~
내공 많이 드릴께요~~~+_+a
One Day in Osaka
Have you ever been to Osaka? Not yet?
If so, I'd like to recommend you to visit the best places in Osaka. You'll go to downtown first, visit Osaka castle, and lastly enjoy a night view of the city.
When you wake up in the morning, you can see a rolling sea on Panstar shipboard. After you eat special breakfast, you will arrive in Osaka. Getting off the ship, you can enjoy old, new, oriental and exotic scene in Osaka.
From unique and pretty accessories to aromatic perfumes or clothes, there are many interesting shops in Shinsaibashi street. If you are a movie fan, it would be a good idea to visit Universal Studio Japan that is a famous movie theme park. Universal Studio Japan makes you feel like you have entered a make-believe world of motion pictures, and offers various exciting attractions. In addition, you can see various creatures in Osaka Aquarium Kaiyukan. The tower's 48th-floor restaurant which name is World Buffet, serves buffet style meals and desserts.
Now, it's time to enjoy cherry-blossom party in Osaka. you can take a walk slowly in Osaka Castle. In the main tower of Osaka Castle which name is chunsugak, you can learn the history of this castle at every floor. The top floor is the observation deck, from 50 meters above the ground where you can enjoy a panoramic view of this city.
At night, you will go Umeda Sky Building which has a floating garden at the top. It is the only place in Japan where you can go outside on the rooftop and command a 360-degree outlook. Enjoy a beautiful night scene of Osaka!
ㅠ_ㅠ 영작을 하긴 했는데;;;;;;월요일(4.13)까지 마감을 해야 하는데..
제 실력이 허접해서 누구에게 부탁을 해야할 지 몰라 즐 지식인에~올려봅니다~
시간이 얼마 없어서... (__) 부족하지만 부탁드릴께요~
내공 많이 드릴께요~~~+_+a
One Day in Osaka
Have you ever been to Osaka? Not yet?
If so, I'd like to recommend you to visit the best places in Osaka. You'll go to downtown first, visit Osaka castle, and lastly enjoy a night view of the city.
When you wake up in the morning, you can see a rolling sea on Panstar shipboard. After you eat special breakfast, you will arrive in Osaka. Getting off the ship, you can enjoy old, new, oriental and exotic scene in Osaka.
From unique and pretty accessories to aromatic perfumes or clothes, there are many interesting shops in Shinsaibashi street. If you are a movie fan, it would be a good idea to visit Universal Studio Japan that is a famous movie theme park. Universal Studio Japan makes you feel like you have entered a make-believe world of motion pictures, and offers various exciting attractions. In addition, you can see various creatures in Osaka Aquarium Kaiyukan. The tower's 48th-floor restaurant which name is World Buffet, serves buffet style meals and desserts.
Now, it's time to enjoy cherry-blossom party in Osaka. you can take a walk slowly in Osaka Castle. In the main tower of Osaka Castle which name is chunsugak, you can learn the history of this castle at every floor. The top floor is the observation deck, from 50 meters above the ground where you can enjoy a panoramic view of this city.
At night, you will go Umeda Sky Building which has a floating garden at the top. It is the only place in Japan where you can go outside on the rooftop and command a 360-degree outlook. Enjoy a beautiful night scene of Osaka!
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