영어 수행평가인데 틀린문장 같은거 있는지 확인해주세요ㅠ

영어 수행평가인데 틀린문장 같은거 있는지 확인해주세요ㅠ

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I would like to recommend the Australian city of Melbourne.
Melbourne is located in Australia
Melbourne has a variety of tourist attractions.
Tourist attractions I recommend include Eureka Skydeck, SEA LIFE AQUARIUM, and
Hosier Lane.
First, the Eureka Skydeck is an observation deck located on the tallest building in
Melbourne.
From the observation deck, you can see the whole of Melbourne at once.
The second is SEA LIFE Aquarium, Australia's representative aquarium.
You can see various underwater animals
The last one is Hosier Lane. Hosier has many murals painted on it. Hosier Lane is famous for a filming location for Korean dramas.
And when you go to Melbourne, there is a park you must visit.
In Australia, there is the Royal Botanic Garden, which is called a city park.
If you visit the Royal Botanic Garden in spring and fall, people will be surprised at
the pretty flowere blooming in the park. So, it is highly recommend the Royal Botanic garden to those who love flowers.



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I would like to recommend the Australian city of Melbourne. Melbourne is located in Australia. Melbourne has a variety of tourist attractions. Tourist attractions I recommend include Eureka Skydeck, SEA LIFE AQUARIUM, and Hosier Lane.

First, the Eureka Skydeck is an observation deck located on the tallest building in Melbourne. From the observation deck, you can see the whole of Melbourne at once. The second is SEA LIFE Aquarium, Australia's representative aquarium. You can see various underwater animals. The last one is Hosier Lane. Hosier has many murals painted on it. Hosier Lane is famous for being a filming location for Korean dramas.

And when you go to Melbourne, there is a park you must visit. In Australia, there is the Royal Botanic Garden, which is called a city park. If you visit the Royal Botanic Garden in spring and fall, people will be surprised at the pretty flowers blooming in the park. So, it is highly recommended to visit the Royal Botanic Garden for those who love flowers.

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