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1 . Many people who live in Earth are not interested in environment pollution.
2.Especially, air pollution is a big problem to people who live in Korea.
3.The major reason of the air pollution is fine dust
4Fine dust is a very small dust which is harmful to people
5. If we are exposed to fine dust for a long time, our lifespan will reduce.
6.Fine dust can make you lose your immunity
7.Then, how do we protect our health from fine dust?
8.It is impossible to prevent fine dust perfectly.
9.But, there are some cool ways to protect you from fine dust.
10.First, you should wear the mask that protect you from the fine dust
11.Second, you should drink a lot of water every day.
12. There are the several ways to protect your body from the finedust
1 . Many people who live in Earth are not interested in environment pollution.
2.Especially, air pollution is a big problem to people who live in Korea.
3.The major reason of the air pollution is fine dust
4Fine dust is a very small dust which is harmful to people
5. If we are exposed to fine dust for a long time, our lifespan will reduce.
6.Fine dust can make you lose your immunity
7.Then, how do we protect our health from fine dust?
8.It is impossible to prevent fine dust perfectly.
9.But, there are some cool ways to protect you from fine dust.
10.First, you should wear the mask that protect you from the fine dust
11.Second, you should drink a lot of water every day.
12. There are the several ways to protect your body from the finedust