수행평가 첨삭 부탁드려요
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게시물 수정 , 삭제는 로그인 필요
문법이 틀렸다고 하는데 혹시 수정할 부분 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다.
해당 내용은 충청남도 공주시 여행에 관련된 글로 수행평가 조건으로는 enough to 용법과 현재완료가 각각 2번씩 들어가야합니다
I have been to Gongju before.
I want to tell you about my trip to Gongju.
Day 1, I went to seoul station and took KTX to Gongju. Next, I took a number 280, and number 770 bus.
It takes almost 5 and a half hours to get there.
First day, I went to Magoksa.
It is a big temple in the Gongju.
It has been there since 640.
The temple was amazing enough to see.
After that, I went to Korean Culture Center for lodging. The room was so comfortable enough to put me to sleep. Day 2, I went to Gong San Seong and the Tomb of King Muryeong. Both place was so diginified and beautiful
After I complete my trip to Gong San Seong, I came back to my home.
It was satisfying
해당 내용은 충청남도 공주시 여행에 관련된 글로 수행평가 조건으로는 enough to 용법과 현재완료가 각각 2번씩 들어가야합니다
I have been to Gongju before.
I want to tell you about my trip to Gongju.
Day 1, I went to seoul station and took KTX to Gongju. Next, I took a number 280, and number 770 bus.
It takes almost 5 and a half hours to get there.
First day, I went to Magoksa.
It is a big temple in the Gongju.
It has been there since 640.
The temple was amazing enough to see.
After that, I went to Korean Culture Center for lodging. The room was so comfortable enough to put me to sleep. Day 2, I went to Gong San Seong and the Tomb of King Muryeong. Both place was so diginified and beautiful
After I complete my trip to Gong San Seong, I came back to my home.
It was satisfying
