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One of the difficulties I faced was choosing an elective course.

=> One of many difficulties I faced was to choose elective courses.

I didn't know what I interested in. and I wasn't sure about the future.

=> I didn't know what I was interested in.

Moreover, I wasn't sure about my future.

so I was about to choose the course that others chose.

=> Thus, I almost chose the courses that others did but I became aware that it was not a good idea.

To solve this difficulty, I thought about what I liked and what I was good at.

=> To solve this problem, I tried to listen to myself such as what I like most and what I am good at.

Because of this, I definitely decided on my course without caring about others.

=> Doing so, I definitely managed to decide which course to take without others' opinion.

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Due to this experience, I learned the need of considering what I want and what I'm good at.

=> Due to this experience, I learned a lesson that I need to consider what I want and at the same time I am good at.

문법적으로 수정이 필요한 부분은 다음과 같습니다:

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1. I didn't know what I interested in. -> I didn't know what I was interested in.

2. so I was about to choose the course that others chose. -> so I was about to choose the course that others had chosen.

3. To solve this difficulty, I thought about what I liked and what I was good at. -> To solve this difficulty, I thought about what I liked and what I was good at.

4. Because of this, I definitely decided on my course without caring about others. -> Because of this, I definitely decided on my course without caring about what others thought.

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수정된 전체 문장은 다음과 같습니다:

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One of the difficulties I faced was choosing an elective course. I didn't know what I was interested in, and I wasn't sure about the future, so I was about to choose the course that others had chosen. To solve this difficulty, I thought about what I liked and what I was good at. Because of this, I definitely decided on my course without caring about what others thought.