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Hello, my name is nayeon lee and I am a second year student attending somang Middle School. Today I would like to introduce my travel plans. I will travel to Gyeongju with my family in June. The reason I chose Gyeongju as my travel destination was because I wanted to visit Gyeongju World, which is famous on the Internet. Now, let’s talk about what to do in Gyeongju. First, I will go to Gyeongju World, the place I wanted to go the most. We will go there and ride Draken, Gyeongju World’s representative roller coaster. And after riding several rides, we will go to the hotel and go swimming. When I'm done swimming, I'll go to my hotel room to sleep and return home the next day. If I have some time left before returning home, I would like to buy a souvenir. I can’t wait to go to Gyeongju! Thank you for looking at my travel plans so far.
Hello, my name is nayeon lee and I am a second year student attending somang Middle School. Today I would like to introduce my travel plans. I will travel to Gyeongju with my family in June. The reason I chose Gyeongju as my travel destination was because I wanted to visit Gyeongju World, which is famous on the Internet. Now, let’s talk about what to do in Gyeongju. First, I will go to Gyeongju World, the place I wanted to go the most. We will go there and ride Draken, Gyeongju World’s representative roller coaster. And after riding several rides, we will go to the hotel and go swimming. When I'm done swimming, I'll go to my hotel room to sleep and return home the next day. If I have some time left before returning home, I would like to buy a souvenir. I can’t wait to go to Gyeongju! Thank you for looking at my travel plans so far.