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급합다!! 영어 장문 수정
Future Aspiration
My dream is to become a pilot. I feel satisfied when I can safely transport people, and traveling to various places allows me to gain knowledge.
Favorite Quote
"If you lack confidence in yourself, you will never be able to achieve your dreams or become your true self." I believe that even if you are not good at studying, you can choose a different path, but if you lose confidence, you won't be able to do anything.
Resolution
In high school, preparation for college entrance exams begins. Therefore, I think it's important to set your goals first and then make plans accordingly. I also resolve to have consistent effort and patience in order to achieve my goals.
Hobby
My hobby is watching airplane piloting videos.
While watching pilot videos, I imagine my future self.
I also learn how to pilot an airplane as I work towards achieving my dream.
Talent
I have the ability to speak to others in a friendly manner.
I use this talent to listen to other people's concerns and communicate effectively.
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