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Are you aware of the floods that occurred recently in Greece? That was an event that an enormous amount of rain fell in a single day, resulting in thousands of casualties.
In the midst of global climate change, people still lack interest in the environment. As Korea is no longer safe from environmental issues, so we should try to improve them. In order to do that, we need to understand the cause of this situation. The causes of environmental issues vary depending on kinds, such as air pollution, soil pollution and so on. Air pollution arises from carbon dioxide and other pollutants emitted by vehicles and factories. Pesticides and fertilizers used in agriculture, and excessive energy consumption can lead to soil pollution.
Then, how can we solve the problems?
First, we need to make an effort to reduce energy consumption. For short distances, we should encourage bicycle usage and if the government installs public bicycles accessible to everyone in various locations, it could effectively reduce energy consumption. Next, there needs to be a change in the work format. A lot of energy resources are consumed during the commuting process of office workers.
Handling tasks from home, except those that must be dealt with at the office, would help decrease the pollution.
Next, we should change our lifestyle. We need to use each item sparingly and reduce waste production.
Continuous and comprehensive efforts to address environmental pollution are crucial. We must raise awareness of environmental protection and strive to live lifestyles that do not burden the environment. Additionally, governments and international organizations need to enforce strict regulations to ensure everyone participates in preserving the Earth's environment. To make the Earth a better place together, we must take responsibility for our actions.
Are you aware of the floods that occurred recently in Greece? That was an event that an enormous amount of rain fell in a single day, resulting in thousands of casualties.
In the midst of global climate change, people still lack interest in the environment. As Korea is no longer safe from environmental issues, so we should try to improve them. In order to do that, we need to understand the cause of this situation. The causes of environmental issues vary depending on kinds, such as air pollution, soil pollution and so on. Air pollution arises from carbon dioxide and other pollutants emitted by vehicles and factories. Pesticides and fertilizers used in agriculture, and excessive energy consumption can lead to soil pollution.
Then, how can we solve the problems?
First, we need to make an effort to reduce energy consumption. For short distances, we should encourage bicycle usage and if the government installs public bicycles accessible to everyone in various locations, it could effectively reduce energy consumption. Next, there needs to be a change in the work format. A lot of energy resources are consumed during the commuting process of office workers.
Handling tasks from home, except those that must be dealt with at the office, would help decrease the pollution.
Next, we should change our lifestyle. We need to use each item sparingly and reduce waste production.
Continuous and comprehensive efforts to address environmental pollution are crucial. We must raise awareness of environmental protection and strive to live lifestyles that do not burden the environment. Additionally, governments and international organizations need to enforce strict regulations to ensure everyone participates in preserving the Earth's environment. To make the Earth a better place together, we must take responsibility for our actions.
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