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This article is the 22nd text of the mock test in March 2020. The theme of this passage is that "the media industry should pay attention not only to profit-seeking but also to the public interest." According to this passage, media leaders have excellent abilities, but they are like pursuing their own interests. But the media should behave differently from other industries. Because the media industry has a wide range of uses, it emphasizes that it should act differently because it has a responsibility to pursue public interests, not its own interests. While reading the fingerprint, I thought that I totally agree with this content. The media is not only accessible to certain people, but also to young people, the elderly, and even children.
The table above is actually a survey of cell phone possession rates conducted by Statistics Portal. The figure was high at 63.8 percent for those under teens and 96.7 percent for teens, and even 100 percent for those in their 30s said they had cell phones. What this shows is that many people have smartphones and are easy to access the media.
In fact, the media can be easily found in our real lives. Newspapers, TVs, smartphones, and other media have permeated our lives in modern times. Unlike other fields, the media industry will have to take responsibility as it is an environment where media is easily accessible. Therefore, I think the media industry should not show stimulating things to pursue its own interests, but should strive for more public interest.
This article is the 22nd text of the mock test in March 2020. The theme of this passage is that "the media industry should pay attention not only to profit-seeking but also to the public interest." According to this passage, media leaders have excellent abilities, but they are like pursuing their own interests. But the media should behave differently from other industries. Because the media industry has a wide range of uses, it emphasizes that it should act differently because it has a responsibility to pursue public interests, not its own interests. While reading the fingerprint, I thought that I totally agree with this content. The media is not only accessible to certain people, but also to young people, the elderly, and even children.
The table above is actually a survey of cell phone possession rates conducted by Statistics Portal. The figure was high at 63.8 percent for those under teens and 96.7 percent for teens, and even 100 percent for those in their 30s said they had cell phones. What this shows is that many people have smartphones and are easy to access the media.
In fact, the media can be easily found in our real lives. Newspapers, TVs, smartphones, and other media have permeated our lives in modern times. Unlike other fields, the media industry will have to take responsibility as it is an environment where media is easily accessible. Therefore, I think the media industry should not show stimulating things to pursue its own interests, but should strive for more public interest.
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