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After reading this, i found that collaboration have big effect on science and art.
Until now, i thought the great achievements are a wizardly person’s effort but there is wrong thought.
An example that is worked in collaboration with art and science was impressed. I thought they are different but it was interesting that
they developed while helping each other. Therefore I wanted to find other cases and do activities that are related with their collaborations. 여기에서 틀린부분 있는지 봐주세요 제발



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After reading this, I found that collaboration has a big effect on science and art.

Until now, I thought (the 빼구요) great achievements are a wizardly person’s effort but there is something (자연스럽습니다) wrong.

An example that worked in collaboration with art and science was impressive. I thought they were different but it was interesting that

they developed while helping each other. Therefore I wanted to find other cases and do activities that are related with their collaborations

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