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Koreans, when they guess the age of Westerners, they tend to guess it to be higher than their actual age.

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Korean men know very well that the men who are using dialect look attractive to foreign girls.

So they overuse dialect when they want to take a foreign girl.

And other Koreans know that quickly if they are overusing it or using it from subconsciousness.

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Actually, I hate people who are using dialect unnaturally.They look very pretentious, and I can see that they want women's attention.

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한국어로 눈에 보인다 라는 표현이 있잖아요 그걸 그대로 I can see 라고 표현해도 될까요?

가능합니다.

Koreans often tend to estimate the age of Westerners to be higher than their actual age.

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Korean men are aware that using dialect can be appealing to foreign girls, so they tend to overuse it when trying to impress them. Other Koreans quickly pick up on this, whether it's deliberate or subconscious.

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Personally, I find it off-putting when people use dialect in an unnatural way. It comes off as pretentious, and it's clear they're seeking attention from women.

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