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작성일 2023.11.16댓글 2건
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안녕하세요, 과제로 제출해야해서 작성했는데 점검 받고싶어서요. 
혹시 문법적인 오류나 어색한 표현들이 없는지 봐주시면 감사하겠습니다. 
영어에 능숙하고 정말 잘하시는 분들만. 봐주세요. 

I do not recommend early English education in Korea. 
Language is not just a means of communication. Language is intimately related to its own culture and spirit. Thus, I believe children should accept other cultures based on their own country's identity. It is better to first master Korean before learning English.
History shows us that language was involved in most colonial policies. Korea is one example of this. The education of the Korean language was prohibited, and the use of Korean was also restricted during the Japanese occupation. Why did they do this? The deep connection between language and ethnicity is the reason behind this.
Without nations, there is no globalization.
Learning English based on Korean and one's own country's identity is better than early English education. 



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비교해보세요.

I would advise against early English education in Korea. Language extends beyond mere communication; it is intricately tied to culture and spirit. Therefore, I believe children should first embrace their own identity before exploring into other cultures. Mastering Korean before learning English seems like a sensible approach.

Historical instances reveal that colonial policies often involved imposing the language of the invader. Korea is a prime example, where during the Japanese colonial period, Korean language education was prohibited, and the use of Korean was restricted. This restriction highlights the profound link between language and ethnicity.

I contend that without a strong sense of nationhood, true globalization is unattainable. Consequently, I believe it is optimal to learn English grounded in the Korean language and the identity of one's own country, rather than opting for early English education.

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I do not recommend early English education in Korea. Language is not just a means of communication; it is intimately related to its own culture and spirit. Thus, I believe children should embrace other cultures based on their own country's identity. It is better to first master Korean before learning English. History shows us that language was involved in most colonial policies. Korea is one example of this. The education of the Korean language was prohibited, and the use of Korean was also restricted during the Japanese occupation. Why did they do this? The deep connection between language and ethnicity is the reason behind it. Without nations, there is no globalization. Learning English based on Korean and one's own country's identity is better than early English education.

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