급해요제발요ㅜㅜ(((영어 수행평가

급해요제발요ㅜㅜ(((영어 수행평가

작성일 2024.04.16댓글 1건
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안녕하세요ㅜㅜㅜㅜ 중2인데 영어 수행평가 입니당 저의 롤모델을 소개하는건데 조금 길 수 있지만 한 번만 읽고 조금 이상한 문장 있으면 고쳐주세요ㅠ!!!!! 제발용ㅜㅜㅜㅜ My role model in my opinion is Kim Yu-na. She is very attractive, always kind, and who is (주격 관계 대명사를 사용해야하는데 후 이즈가 여기 들어가도 되나요.?) caring to everyone. I liked the way Kim tried to achieve her dream as a teenager, always didn’t give up when practicing, and practiced hard for her dream. Although she is now retired, I want to shine our country as hard as Kim Yu-na, always work courageously, and be a polite person to anyone without giving up on anything.



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My role model, in my opinion, is Kim Yu-na, Who is very attractive, always kind, and caring to everyone.

I admire the way Kim pursued her dream as a teenager,

never giving up during practice, and working hard to achieve her goals.

Although she is now retired, I aspire to represent our country as diligently as Kim Yu-na, always working courageously,

and maintaining politeness towards everyone without giving up on anything.

영어수행평가급해요ㅜㅜ

영어쓰기수행평가에요영어로바꿔주세요급해요제발ㅜㅜ 제인너의방이매우더럽구나.방을치워주겠니? 루이접시를딱고있는에니를도와주겠니?...