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Having occurred(완료형 분사구문) COVID-19, medical waste that is feared to have a harmful effect on the human body is increasing in Korea. In spite of the relevant laws most of which(수량명사+of 관계대명사) have not been properly treated by medical officials.

Why don't medical officials treat medical waste properly? Park Seol-min, a reporter for Sisa Week, said, "Medical wastes should be treated only in private incinerators. In this case, the treatment cost is high." If medical wastes are not properly treated, serious problems such as soil and water pollution occur. In addition, if infectious medical waste is not properly treated, it poses serious a risk of infection to the general public. According to the Ministry of National Defense, medical wastes should be discharged as a dedicated container and stored in a sealed state. After that, they are collected and transported in a dedicated vehicle and disposed of in a dedicated incinerator.

We must protect the environment and pass it on to future generations. If the situation continues as before, environmental pollution will become serious. Therefore, experts need to be aware of the seriousness and properly dispose of medical wastes.