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The eco-friendly product I will introduce is shampoo made of solid.

This product is used instead of shampoo for washing your hair.

Solid shampoo has plastic-free packaging and the economic benefits of being cheap.

It also has the characteristic that it can be used for a long time even in a small amount.

Using this shampoo significantly reduces waste from the packaging.

In addition, it is solid, so you can carry it around without needing to pack it in a separate package.

Solid shampoo also reduces the use of chemicals because it contains natural ingredients.

I wanted to introduce a product that I used myself.

I wanted to recommend it because it has more advantages than popular shampoo.

I hope more people will know about the existence of this product in the future.