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작성일 2023.08.30댓글 2건
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If I had a time machine, I would go to the past.
Because I hurt the person I liked.
If I had a magic carpet, I could fly in the sky.
Because my childhood dream is to see the clouds very closely.
If I were a famous singer, I could make a lot of money.
Because I want to be rich.



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문법적으로 맞는 문장들입니다. 다만, 조금 더 자연스럽게 표현할 수 있는 방법도 있습니다. 아래는 약간 더 자연스럽게 고친 버전입니다:

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"If I had a time machine, I would go to the past because I hurt someone I liked.

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If I had a magic carpet, I could fly in the sky because my childhood dream is to see the clouds up close.

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If I were a famous singer, I could make a lot of money because I want to be rich."

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원문의 내용은 그대로 유지하면서 조금 더 간결하게 표현되었습니다.

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나쁘지 않아요.

Because 절을, It's because ~~ 로 쓰시면 더 좋을듯요

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