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나의 꿈을 주제로 7문장 이상 쓰는건데 조건이 문장의 흐름이 어색하지 않고, 형용사적 용법의 to부정사를 활용한 문장을 1개이상 사용하는거에요. 어색한 부분이나 보완해야할 부분이 있으면 알려주세요 ㅠㅠ
<My dream illustrator>
My dream is to be an illustrator.There are some things I need to do to achieve my dream. First, I go to a painting academy. And I go to university after building my drawing skills. Second, after graduating from university, I do various work related to painting And continue painting activities steadily. If I practice these things well, I will be able to achieve my dream. And I'll do these things.
나의 꿈을 주제로 7문장 이상 쓰는건데 조건이 문장의 흐름이 어색하지 않고, 형용사적 용법의 to부정사를 활용한 문장을 1개이상 사용하는거에요. 어색한 부분이나 보완해야할 부분이 있으면 알려주세요 ㅠㅠ
<My dream illustrator>
My dream is to be an illustrator.There are some things I need to do to achieve my dream. First, I go to a painting academy. And I go to university after building my drawing skills. Second, after graduating from university, I do various work related to painting And continue painting activities steadily. If I practice these things well, I will be able to achieve my dream. And I'll do these things.
