영어 수행평가 글쓴거 한번 봐주세요ㅠㅠㅠ

영어 수행평가 글쓴거 한번 봐주세요ㅠㅠㅠ

작성일 2023.05.23댓글 1건
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제가 영어 수행평가로 실용적인 환경 교육에 대한 찬성의견을 적었는데, 문법적으로나 어휘, 흐름상 안맞는 거 있는지 봐주시면 감사하겠습니다.

Environmental issues are one of the most urgent and complex problems we face.
Climate change, resource depletion and biodiversity reduction are affecting all of us, and great efforts are needed to address them.
It is a really necessary solution to strengthen practical environmental education to solve these problems.
Practical environmental education helps students to acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to understand and respond to environmental problems.

First, Practical environmental education emphasizes to students how to conserve resources and the importance of recycling.
This education teaches how to save energy and natural resources due to limited resources.
Students can realize the importance of recycling and learn how to reduce waste, recycle, and conserve resources in your daily life.
Therefore, This practical education helps develop a sense of responsibility for the environment.

Lastly, practical environmental education deals with various topics to induce students’ interest and participation.
Students learn everyday ways, such as recycling, resource conservation, energy efficiency, and eco-friendly transportation.
Based on this, students can have a positive effect on the environment in their daily lives.
Therefore, students can understand how their choices affect the environment and even think about the impact of their behavior on future generations.

Strengthening practical environmental education is a key factor in increasing our responsive ability to the environment.
Through this education, students can understand the complexity of environmental problems, learn solutions, and develop a sense of responsibility and cooperation.
We will be able to protect the Earth’s resources and drive positive changes for a sustainable future.
We must work together to strengthen environmental education and lay the foundation for a better future.

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Climate change, resource depletion and biodiversity reduction are affecting all of us, and great efforts are needed to address them.

-> Climate change, resource depletion and biodiversity reduction are affecting all of us. Great efforts are needed to address these three problems.

It is a really necessary solution to strengthen practical environmental education to solve these problems.

-> To solve these problems, we must strengthen practical environmental education.

First, Practical environmental education emphasizes to students how to conserve resources and the importance of recycling.

-> First, practical environmental education emphasizes the importance of conserving resources and the importance of recycling to students.

This education teaches how to save energy and natural resources due to limited resources.

-> This education teaches them how to save energy and natural resources. It is necessary that they know how to save these due to our limited resources.

Students can realize the importance of recycling and learn how to reduce waste, recycle, and conserve resources in your daily life.

Therefore, This practical education helps develop a sense of responsibility for the environment.

-> Students can realize the importance of recycling and learn how to reduce waste, recycle, and conserve resources in their daily lives.

Therefore, this practical education helps students develop a sense of responsibility for the environment.

Lastly, practical environmental education deals with various topics to induce students’ interest and participation.

Students learn everyday ways, such as recycling, resource conservation, energy efficiency, and eco-friendly transportation.

Based on this, students can have a positive effect on the environment in their daily lives.

Therefore, students can understand how their choices affect the environment and even think about the impact of their behavior on future generations.

-> Also, practical environmental education expands on various topics to induce students’ interest and participation.

Students learn everyday ways to be green, such as recycling, participating in resource conservation, being a part of energy efficiency, and using eco-friendly transportation.

Based on this, students can have a positive effect on the environment in their daily lives.

Therefore, students can understand how their choices affect the environment and even think about the impact of their behavior on future generations.

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