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약간의 수정을 한다면

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1. 원문: "If I made food that I want to make, I would make dessert."

수정: "If I were to make food that I wanted to make, I would make dessert."

설명: "If I were to make"는 가정법 과거를 더 명확하게 표현합니다.

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2. 원문: "The reason I want to give it to my family is that I stayed close and took care of it."

수정: "The reason I want to give it to my family is that I have stayed close to them and taken care of them."

설명: "them"을 사용하여 "my family"를 명확하게 지칭하고, "have stayed"와 "taken care of them"으로 시제를 과거완료로 맞추어 줍니다.

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3. 원문: "The reason I want to give it to me is that I wanted to make my own dessert one day."

수정: "The reason I want to give it to myself is that I have always wanted to make my own dessert."

설명: "to myself"로 바꾸어 정확한 대명사 사용을 보여주고, "have always wanted"로 과거완료를 사용하여 일관된 시제를 유지합니다.

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4. 원문: "Not knowing how to bake, but I want to learn baking so that I can make desserts and give them as gifts."

수정: "Despite not knowing how to bake, I want to learn so that I can make desserts and give them as gifts."

설명: "Despite not knowing"으로 시작하는 분사구문으로 문장을 더 자연스럽게 시작합니다. "so that" 구문은 이미 잘 사용되었습니다.