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Have you ever been to travel? Then did you travel with any companions or travel alone. It has each advantage and disadvantage. In my opinion I prefer to travel alone.

The biggest reason is to travel alone can feel freedom. If travel alone, you should do everything alone.  Such as find hotel, can choose where I will go and can choose what I will eat. It is an opportunity to do what we want at the time we want to do what we want. I traveled alone before; I met my friend, who lives in Seoul. I was so glad to meet her. And I talked with her. However, I do not care other people and time

Second reason is I can know more about me. During travel, I can find me. Also, the self-reliance can be raised. I can think just me and trip. Also, I am able to develop independence. One article said that traveling alone can solve your troubles

 Therefore, travel alone I do not have to care too much about others. As a result, I can travel only for me. In conclusion I prefer to travel alone