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아래는 오늘 오전에 업데이트한 오토레이팅 비율 현황입니다.모든부킹을 9416 시스템 시의적절하게 적용하기 위해 각부킹 에이전트를 계속 모니터링하십시오.칭다오의 경우 빠른 시일 내에 오토래이팅 비율을 높이는 것이 필수적임을 알려드립니다.말씀해주시고 약속해주신 것처럼 다음 주에는 더 좋은 비율을 볼 수 있기를 바랍니다.Below is the status of current booking auto-rating ratio which is updated today morning.Please keep mornitoring each of booking agent to apply whole booking in 9476 system timely.In case of qingdao, kindly note that it's imperative to increase the auto-rating ratio asap.as you mentioned and promised, I hope I can see the better ratio next week.번역기오니 간단명료하게 확인 및 수정부탁드립니다!채택은 반드시하겠습니다

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Subject: Request for Modification of English Email

Dear [Recipient's Name],

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to request a modification to the English email content sent earlier today regarding the updated auto-rating ratio status.

Below is the revised version of the email:

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Subject: Update on Auto-Rating Ratio for Bookings

Dear [Recipient's Name],

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to provide you with the latest update on the auto-rating ratio for bookings, as of this morning. It is essential to ensure that all bookings are properly applied in the 9416 system by monitoring each booking agent diligently.

I would like to emphasize the importance of increasing the auto-rating ratio promptly in the case of Qingdao. I appreciate your attention to this matter and I am hopeful that we will see improved ratios as per your commitment by next week.

Thank you for your cooperation and prompt action on this matter.

Best regards,

[Your Name]

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Please review the revised email content and let me know if any further modifications are needed. Thank you.

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