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Let me tell you how Koreans’our favorite food, chicken becaome fried with the flour as we currently eat. ,Chickens were made by black slaves working on American farms. in the 1800s gathered It stems from the fact that black slaves fried the left parts of chicken to eat by a white owner like leftover chicken neck, legs and wings to eat using and used oil. That became ecomes the present fried chicken we eat.What I felt writing when I wrote this article interested writing this article was interesting because that it has been was only 200 years since people I started eating fried chicken, and I was surprised that the farm owners left the chicken neck, legs, wings, etc.
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