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First, I want to go to a big American city.
Last year, I became interested in American culture when I listened to Justin Bieber's songs and fell into pop songs.
So I want to go to the U.S. in person and experience many big cities like New York, Los Angeles, and Houston.
And if I have a chance, I want to go to New York, which is one of the three biggest cities.
Second, I want to go skydiving in Dubai.
By skydiving, I want to feel the thrill of the moment.
Also I want to appreciate the ecstatic scenery of Dubai from above the sky.
And I think this challenge will help me overcome my fear.
Lastly, I want celebrate my grandfather's 80th birthday by playing the guitar.
My grandfather is planning to host his 80th birthday party this December.
So, I want to please him by playing his favorite music with a finger-style guitar.
I can’t play that music well now, but I will practice hard for 8 months and play that music without fail.
3가지 버킷리스트를 작성하는게 영어수행인데 어색한 문장이 있는지 좀 봐주세요.
First, I want to go to a big American city.
Last year, I became interested in American culture when I listened to Justin Bieber's songs and fell into pop songs.
So I want to go to the U.S. in person and experience many big cities like New York, Los Angeles, and Houston.
And if I have a chance, I want to go to New York, which is one of the three biggest cities.
Second, I want to go skydiving in Dubai.
By skydiving, I want to feel the thrill of the moment.
Also I want to appreciate the ecstatic scenery of Dubai from above the sky.
And I think this challenge will help me overcome my fear.
Lastly, I want celebrate my grandfather's 80th birthday by playing the guitar.
My grandfather is planning to host his 80th birthday party this December.
So, I want to please him by playing his favorite music with a finger-style guitar.
I can’t play that music well now, but I will practice hard for 8 months and play that music without fail.
3가지 버킷리스트를 작성하는게 영어수행인데 어색한 문장이 있는지 좀 봐주세요.