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I waste too much time dragging out on small stuff or homework and procrastinate the things which are very important and helpful.

→ I waste too much time dragging out small stuff or homework and procrastinate the things that are very important and helpful.

So I thought, 'if I keep going on like this with no change, I'll not get to any goals and I'll regret greatly not to have done things, in the end.'

→ So I thought, 'if I keep going on like this with no change, I'll not (I won’t) get to any goals and in the end, I’ll regret greatly not having done these things.'

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First of all, I will make monthly, weekly, and daily planner in methodical way.

→ First of all, I will make a monthly, weekly, and daily planner in a methodical way.

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It is because I have usually done things without making any plan, and I thought this is the big reason of my problem.

→ It is because I have been doing things without making any plans, and I thought this was a big reason for my problem.

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I will try to overcome my fear of things that I have to do, and face it enjoyably and thankfully. Through all of this effort, I will be able to feel better about myself and live a healthier and fruitful life.

→ I will try to overcome my fear of things that I have to do, and face them enjoyably and thankfully. Through all these efforts, I will be able to feel better about myself and live a healthier and more fruitful (= rewarding) life.

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