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안녕하세요~^^답변드려요

문법에 초점을 맞춰서 교정해드리겠습니다.

내용 : My dream is to be a science professor because I like teaching and explaining well, and I even like science. There are many things that can help me achieve my dream. First, I will get admission to SUNG KYUN KWAN UNIVERSITY, and second, I will get a doctoral degree. Third, I will become a professor, and lastly, I will write a book related to my major.

교정 :

• explain well and | even like science. => explain well, and I even like science. (쉼표로 구분)

• Thare => There

• Firse => First

• will Admission => will be admitted to

• and second I will getting => and second, I will earn

• third will be a professor => third, I will become a professor

• last. will write => Lastly, I will write

수행 체점기준에 어긋난 부분은 없어보입니다. 하지만, 이 내용은 단순한 서술형으로만 구성된 것으로 보입니다. 글을 좀 더 다양한 문장 구조와 더 매끄러운 표현으로 재구성하면 더욱 좋을 것입니다.

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도움되셨다면 답변확정부탁드릴게요^^